A few Poems

God_Of_Death

Date: Friday, 2009-10-23, 12:00:08 PM | Message # 16

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Well princess now I know who to ask next semester when I need help with poetry units.

PrincessParanoia

Date: Saturday, 2009-10-24, 5:12:12 AM | Message # 17

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Sure, Shinigami-kun! You can ask Hime-chi anything! Hime-chi would be glad to answer! smile

P.S. I wonder if Yuki-chi is all right... sad

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if u wana do sumthin' good, u gota do sumthin' bad.

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William_M

Date: Sunday, 2009-10-25, 0:15:58 AM | Message # 18

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I like how you refer to creativity then zoom back to "gothic poetry." fyi its all the same so deal. and yeah it's important f the authoer has suffored because if they haven't they're basically makng it all up. and fyi when have the japanise ever done anything right when it comes to literature. didn't they invent manga

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omg I swear if you ask her instead of me you deserve whatever comes your way in terms of a grade, keep that in mind, she clearly has been forcefed creative bs since birth. theres no style in this, it's all the same.

God_Of_Death

Date: Sunday, 2009-10-25, 9:06:12 AM | Message # 19

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Kind of rude honestly but I will answer you in stating that I would ask my brother anyway since he is a history and english teacher.

Whimsicalyuki

Date: Monday, 2009-10-26, 5:23:32 AM | Message # 20

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i mean criticism is useful but i don't really like the whole tone of william's posts >_< they seem.... rude >_< anyways yeah i've suffered but some don't believe and i doubt they even care since i'm not suffering right now, it's just something that i can't let go of and sometimes stress brings out the suffering from the past, which in simple terms are pretty much physical abuse, mental abuse, and a little bit of sexual abuse(haven't been completely raped, only forced to do something sexual.) I write poems to get my emotions out of me, so not really to be creative or for the audience, but for myself, and i just wanted to see if anyone liked it or if anyone has ever thought of something like this at their times in the darkness

EDIT: like he could say something like "it could use a lot of improvements, like it should be less self-centered,......" instead of going off and uhmm cussing and everything, because it seems to me like that william just wants to throw his stress from real life onto others using foul language or attitude.. but that's just my guess >_<

what would happen if Yuki was a vampire

Message edited by Whimsicalyuki - Monday, 2009-10-26, 5:39:42 AM

PrincessParanoia

Date: Wednesday, 2009-11-04, 1:26:58 AM | Message # 21

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Quote (William_M)

and fyi when have the japanise ever done anything right when it comes to literature.

William-san, are you insinuating that the Japanese are uncreative people?! That's just pure discrimination! What do you have against us, by the way? Please do not generalize "uncreativity" to the whole of Japan when I never said anything about your own race! That's just so rude! If you've only been to our place before then you will get to appreciate things which are invisible to the eye and stop being rude about literature...

I can't stand this anymore...
At first, you were saying something bad on Yuki-chan's poems, I've forgiven you for it since it's your mind, not mine.
But now you've reached a really sensitive boundary. I hope you think about it!

And lastly, William-san, it's not "japanise" - - - please, it's JAPANESE!

[Princess Paranoia] .......<3....... Sumtyms n lyf,
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Whimsicalyuki

Date: Saturday, 2009-11-07, 1:27:15 PM | Message # 22

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Personally i think anything can be Art, and thus anything can be creative. So i sooooo do not agree with that comment, and plus I love japanese anime and a lot of people do too~!, and uhmm haiku is from japan isn't it? :P

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PrincessParanoia

Date: Tuesday, 2009-11-10, 4:36:07 AM | Message # 23

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and uhmm haiku is from japan isn't it? :P

Haiku is a short Japanese poem about nature, Yuki-chan. And it's well-loved in every subject of literature.
I can't understand why William-san thinks that way though... A lot of people love Japanese art...

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Whimsicalyuki

Date: Friday, 2009-11-13, 4:36:37 PM | Message # 24

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I know :P and haiii hime-oneechi we haven't talked in a while >_> you should add me to your msn or somethings so we can chat :P

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